Addiction

Great flow, great vocab, great poem...this was short and flowed so well it made the reading so much easier...best wishes. -unattractive1

I thought the begingingingigng really trapped a reader making me want to read more.
And the shortness made the flow really good.
Well done, I loved it.

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Depression, anger, sadness, fears,
Sick and twisted, hopeless tears.

i so totally loved the start. well done. the words were suited to each other.

5/5 David

I still think yu`re an ah`mazing writer .
It`s kind of dark, but still well written .
Short, great flow, and emotional .
Just beauutiful [;
..__MiNDYY

Hun r u ok do you need to talk i dont like to hear you so down lordy lord. you hardly ever write sad poems. If you need to talk i am here.