by Amber Feb 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Walking along the path, |
by LoreNz0
This poems was brilliant from start to finish. the tale that was told, held a powerful message and conveyed it very well. kinda romeo and juliet with a bit of a twist, very well done! 5* |
by sam
Girl i read this poem at first by your request but i love it so much and it hits me hard. i've been there more then i know but what can i say but i love this poem |
Very sad poem. Yet, well expressed. Sometimes when people try to express powerful emotions they over-do it, but I believe you did it very well. Great work, |
by Amber
Thanks <3 |
by HaileyHelen
Luved it definately 1 of mii favs! |