by Gabrielle Feb 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Through my eyes |
Somehow this poem touches you in a real romantic way. It rhymes... at least beginning stanza's, which are the strongest, then the theme is visible, but the ending needed to be a little more connected and perhaps have the same rhyme theme. Anyway, I liked it. But, I wonder why the gift of writing suddenly stopped 4 yrs ago. |