by aDORKable x3 Feb 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Contest Write :] |
Wow, wonderfully emotional peice of poetry you wrote here, great Job. I loved it, but I must say, your stanzas are huge, you might want to break them up a little more. Other than that, the flow was great. |
COMMENT # 5 |
5/5. This poem especially spoke right to my heart. I loved the 2nd and last stanza's. It had such emotion hidden away and you just somehow bring that out amazingly. |
You left too soon and my words, unspoken |
by Jenni Marie
I LOVED this! |