Awwwwwwwwwwwww this is so so so sad! its really good! great job!i loved it!

if you dont mind can you comment some of my poems please! thank you!

I LOVED this!
The emotion behind the wors are clear to see, and this is something I can relate to.
The flow was flawless and the wording a pleasure to read.
Excellent work.

You left too soon and my words, unspoken
Leave my heart feeling so bruised and broken

that line got me. absolutely perfect! 10/5 if thats possible.

5/5. This poem especially spoke right to my heart. I loved the 2nd and last stanza's. It had such emotion hidden away and you just somehow bring that out amazingly.

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again... a great write... the flow is flawless... some of the rhymes seemed forced... but then there were many lines that had so much power.. my favorite was...
"I would scream the words that I could barely mutter"
wow.... it paints a picture ... spectacular

Wow, wonderfully emotional peice of poetry you wrote here, great Job. I loved it, but I must say, your stanzas are huge, you might want to break them up a little more. Other than that, the flow was great.

Peace, Joe