by The Queen of Spades Feb 22, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
The words in their hearts |
by J Lau
Wow... nicely done! Amazing flow and choice of words. It was simple yet deep. Great job!! Keep writing... 5/5 |
This was really good. Great wording. |
by Jessie
That was amazing, it feels like those words were meant to be put together like that. It flows really well and I got what you were trying to say, I like the subject. Nice poem. |
by Jenni
Wow. this was a really good poem. I loved the wording and the images you conjured in my mind were superb! a wonderful write! 5/5 |
I loved that poem, very nice flow, wording, stanza form..everything...i loved the last stanza as well as this one: |