by TinyDancer46 Feb 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
**First poem I've written in a while, so it may be a little rusty.** |
by Nikkicola
Wow I have to say I know exactly how you feel with this one. I am going through the same thing. It is absoultly amazing at how you seem to be able to catch emotion in every single stanza. Some people write to write but you write to show emotion. Which is indeed felt within all of your poems. :-) |
This is really good along with all of you others it reminded me of exactly how i felt everyday when my exb/f walked by me with his girl i'd prolly still feel that way if i still lived there.... very very good keep it up!! |
by Jenni Marie
You came very highly recommended for me to check out and i have to say, i'm impressed. this was a beautifully written piece. the imagery, emotion and depth, content, concept and flow all came together to create a truly beautiful read. filled with suci melancholy and hopelessness yes. but a beautiful piece of art nontheless. |
by Blissful
Another amazing poem you have here. The emotion here was just flawless. Congrats, you have just made my favorites :] |
by l0VEiSPAiN
Ii l0VE iit S0 mUCH |