Love the foot note hun! Yes I figured it was about mike....I am under poems block...and can't think of anything. My friend Ile thinks I am blowing the I love Jake thing way out of proportion and *sighs* I just don't get life sometimes!

Very cute, darlin. I like the title a whole bunch. It's very sweet. Yet, it isn't so sugary sweet that I feel a cavity coming on ;)

Very very nice.

I love how heatfelt this poem is. nice work.

"You mean the world to me
And I don't ever want to lose you
Your arms are my sanctuary.
And when you hold me,
The world seems to stop moving,
And I want the moment to last forever....
Don't let go of me..."

My favorite part. I absolutely love this poem. It has a lot of good meanings and is really true. <3 Good work! You're added to my favorites!

<3, Shades of Blue

Another great poem. the love is evident in this, and there is a secret deeper meaning in this. that i don't know. but i liked it anyway. i have to give you a 5/5. david

"You mean the world to me
And I don't ever want to lose you
Your arms are my sanctuary.
And when you hold me,
The world seems to stop moving,
And I want the moment to last forever....
Don't let go of me..."

that was my favorite part as well... great writing, and the flow was great... 5/5 from me, and thanks a lot for the many comments!!

xoxo Sara

Wow this was a beautiful poem. It was deep and it sounded alive if you know what i mean. I loved it and i cant wait to read more. I hope you have more poems like this.

~~~~~~Chained4ever~~~~~~~5/5

Thats really funny xDD

Excellent, ur description of santuary is perfect. superb 5/5 truely.