by Sorefromreality Feb 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Friends gather round, to pay their respects |
by ReBecca
Well.....I think the actiual poem was incredible. The first several verses especially. But the last few lost me. They didnt seem to relate with the previus portion of the poem. It was like reading 2 different books. |
by Tammie
The story behind this is really deep. This is one of your best poems most definately. The flow was smoothe, and the rhyming was good, the only thing that put me off was the three lined stanza, but that's nothing really. The end was very strong and so true. I bet so many people do the same thing when someone close dies to them and it's the same sitation. Excellent poem! I wish I could give it more than a 5/5 because it's so worth more. |
*Why didn't anyone see the pain in Heidi's eyes? |
by esmeralda
Wow i hope this really didnt happen but i really like this poem 5/5 |