Wow i hope this really didnt happen but i really like this poem 5/5

*Why didn't anyone see the pain in Heidi's eyes?
It was not another person that caused her to die
Don't try to solve a mystery, that isn't even there
Stop pretending you love her now,
Because it's too late to care*

Even tho this stanza didn't rhyme, I just love it because it's so true. A great poem, exactly how my ppl feel.

The story behind this is really deep. This is one of your best poems most definately. The flow was smoothe, and the rhyming was good, the only thing that put me off was the three lined stanza, but that's nothing really. The end was very strong and so true. I bet so many people do the same thing when someone close dies to them and it's the same sitation. Excellent poem! I wish I could give it more than a 5/5 because it's so worth more.

Much love,
Tammie xo

Well.....I think the actiual poem was incredible. The first several verses especially. But the last few lost me. They didnt seem to relate with the previus portion of the poem. It was like reading 2 different books.