You hurt me inside

by TINSLEY   Feb 22, 2007


You killed my soul, you killed my spirit,
You made me cry, you made me die; inside
You broke my heart, you stopped me loving,
You crushed my pride, you said you loved me,

...........YOU LIED!!!!!.............................

You pulled me up just to push me back down,
you tore me in half and torched my heart,
I asked for your love you didn't turn me down,
But now you just pull me apart.

I loved you and much more,
And now i don't. I just want to die,
When i do I'll burn in hell forevermore,
Now when we touch we don't fly,
Not anymore; All i have to say is goodbye.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amandalynn

    I loved ur poem..it's got deep emotion that needed to be surfaced..it was realli good..5/5
    manda

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was great O.O 5/5

    First one of yours I've ever read but I'll have to read the rest =)

    You expressed the pain and anger so perfectly that it made my heart hurt all over again =( Great work =)

    ***Rhea***

  • 17 years ago

    by Destiny Marie Babyy

    Really well done babe, loved it 5/5 all the way ttyl bye hun

    love ur sex on toast

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Extreme emotion here.