Interesting poem. Enjoyed reading it. Keep it up.

Wonderful. I loved the meaning of this poem and the way it flowed. Keep it up, it's really great!
<3Raych

and thanks for commenting on my poem

Excellent job! This really makes you stop and think.

Stranger in my thought
And stranger in my dream
Look what I've got
Left here to redeem

Great stanza!
Take care Cindy

I like the theme and flow of poem lot, added with deep meaning.
Good write ,keep up.

Thank you so much for your encoragement and comment.

Best Regards
chavii.

Nice poem!

Beautiful flow! And appreciate the comment! 5/5

Well done. I especially like:

There is a stranger in my life
Eclipse in my heart

Wow i liked it. :)

Just a nice poem. Nothing more, nothing less. Nice flow, nice rhyme =]
5/5
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Interesting poem. Enjoyed reading it. Keep it up

Love it :)
All your poems are great, but this one is my fav :D