Like a wedding vow

by soraya horeman   Feb 22, 2007


You slowly tell what you expect
what you demand, what you'll respect
how many and when
they're walking and talking
but what then?
are we even still together?
is our love so long lasting?
are we laughing? or flabbergasting?
like a wedding vow, you tell me
who and what you love
right here and right now

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  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very good. It was more powerful in the sense of simple bluntness. More writes on here try too hard, but this was spot on. Thanks for sharing.