I liked this. ive always wanted to do a happy birthday poem. the only things i found a lil confusing or off were:
the homeward bound part--isn't that sayiing that guests left the party?

and hay in the last stanza-hey.

Nice. That was an awesome birthday poem. NICE work!!

xoxo

Aww cute lil poem....

Wow sara..you are really a goof ball.....
wow you are right you do think slow lol i am jus playin wit you...comment my new called why shall i???

Lets see that is a good question wut is up in Leena's life?? lol
well lets just say that life is treating me good.. I always pray to god so life is always treating me good.
The only thing is that i have to go bac to school cuz we had winter vacation so its gonna be over on monday.. and the other thing is i have 3 projects due on the same day when i get bac to school. I still have do them but other than that everything is goin good.. so did u guys have your winter vacatrion yet????
well bye goofball lol jus playing......

Well my school is just fine i guess but the onli realli fun times in school i have is lunch time.. caz like the teachers r so boring ... o ya i am not finished lol.. well in my school we dont really have hot guys lol
they are ok but i dont really find them attractive caz like there all messed up lol... so you have a boyfriend??

Hey very nice birthday poem. i can never really write a birthday poem. great work! keep it up 5/5

Nahhhhh i dont have a bf but o well soon i will lol
yup i have school tomorrow. and i finished the projects just right now lol
so u done with all your homework??
u have school tomorow too right?????

Lol usually i go to bed at like 2 in the morning but now school is starting i have to go to bed around 11... that suks lol and i gotta wake up at 6:00 in da morning..damn it lol but if i didnt have school i would be waking up around 10 thro 11... wut about you???

Lol ya i know right but i might not hav school tomorrow caz of snow~~~~
but i dont know about you lol

Damn your lucky caz we had a delyaed opening so i got up at 6;40 and put the t.v on and it said that we have school at 10 am.. i was like so angry..lol so wut did you do the whole day since you were off lol

Hi sara
girl you are so luky that u went sledding. i have been hoping that for a while lol
anywayz school went ususual like always lol...............
so i bet you had a lot of fun huh??? lol
anywayz how are you goofball lol hhahahahahah

I know right. well school went fine and i was just hangin out wit my friends lol so how was ur day goffball??? lol haha anyways did you have a skool off again huh lol

Lol ya i just came back from school and i have to do my homework but i dont feel like doing it lol..
and i have to do study for my test and she gave us like 1 week to study but lol i am going to study at the last minute.. o my gosh that just remined me i have to study right now lol hahahahahahahaha comment bac goffy lol

Ya i watch american idol but i only watch it when i get the time but its a good show... I like hearing horrible voices so i can make fun of them lol jus kidding lol hahahahahahahahaha
comment bac goofy

Lol you like your brothers best friend???? lol jus playing. does he really look like justin timberlake b/c if he did then he is really hot!!!lol anywayz how old r they????