Mmm.

i liked this. structure would make it sooo much more powerful. also, keep it boy girl boy girl.

This poem made me think of
just how similar we all are each with our own pain by pain just the same
good job love this one
cy

Emotions

By: Sam leswig

He cut's because he failed a test.
She burns because her boyfriend broke her heart.

So many different scars,
So many different types of pain.

She cries every night before she goes to sleep.
He cries in the middle of every class.

So many tears,
So many forms of depression.

He yells at everyone for no apparent reason.
She yells at her little brother to let out stress.

So many words,
So many ways to show emotions.

you should change the format
and nice name you changed it i almost couldnt find you oh and i made an account im going to put some stuff from my diary in to a poem and put it up ok well ily<3