I wanna boy

by Kaila   Feb 23, 2007


I wanna a boy
Who treats me right
Who makes sure I'm happy
day and night

I wanna boy
Who needs my love
And treats me like
An angel from above

I wanna boy
He holds me tight
And will hold on forever
with all there might

I wanna boy
Who's charming and sweet
One of those who will
sweep me off my feet

I wanna boy
Rugged and tough
But shows there feelings
when the going gets rough

I wanna boy
Who loves me for me
and I don't have to put on an act
Just to please

I wanna boy
He gets my weird quirks
And when I'm being whiny
Gives me one of those evil smirks

I wanna boy
Who loves me so true
That I'm the only thing that matters
when the day is through

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  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Don't we all?

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Beautiful write. The flow and repetition was good. Instead of using the word, "wanna" use "want" it makes you look more intellegent with your writing, for the other term you used is slang, not English. Other than that this was a wonderfully written peice of poetry.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    This entire poem made me smile. I think every girl wants this, and when we finally get it.. Oh boy, oh boy. I can't wait. :]

    "I wanna boy
    He gets my weird quirks
    And when I'm being whiny
    Gives me one of those evil smirks"
    ^ I loved that! So cute, and extremely easily for me to relate to. Lol.

    Keep it up, sweetie.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Haha. i liked this poem. the rhyming and everything was great. if only guys were that perfect...

    I wanna boy
    Rugged and tough
    But shows there feelings
    when the going gets rough

    its THEIR feelings.

    <3
    5/5. cute.

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    WOW!! this is great!! i know exactly how you feel!!!!!!!!

    ~shanny~

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