Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, and i am sure you will find such a boy.. and i also want such girl.. very gr8 wrk... and you are talented writer... carry on your wok take care

Cute poem...

I hear you on that one thought guys like that are spread out far. So when you say i want a boy like that i wish you lot of luck!! That poem was nicely written i think just about every girl wants a boy like that! Great job!

Awsome.. it means alot.. i love it!

Awsome.. it means alot.. i love it!

I think all girls wanna boy like this lol, but these things so simple are actually very hard to find in a guy, but there out there and great job on this you have talent girl

WOW!! this is great!! i know exactly how you feel!!!!!!!!

~shanny~

Haha. i liked this poem. the rhyming and everything was great. if only guys were that perfect...

I wanna boy
Rugged and tough
But shows there feelings
when the going gets rough

its THEIR feelings.

<3
5/5. cute.

This entire poem made me smile. I think every girl wants this, and when we finally get it.. Oh boy, oh boy. I can't wait. :]

"I wanna boy
He gets my weird quirks
And when I'm being whiny
Gives me one of those evil smirks"
^ I loved that! So cute, and extremely easily for me to relate to. Lol.

Keep it up, sweetie.
5/5

Beautiful write. The flow and repetition was good. Instead of using the word, "wanna" use "want" it makes you look more intellegent with your writing, for the other term you used is slang, not English. Other than that this was a wonderfully written peice of poetry.

Peace, Joe

Don't we all?