Too much

by Kat   Feb 23, 2007


Everyday I tread on
And every second is gone
Day by day pass
One by one at last
Hour by hour alone
And the cause is unknown
Theres to many hours in a day
This world I only see Grey
Every day i feel
Like i will never heal
And i ask everyone for me
To just let me be
And i will never feel anybodies touch
With this world theres just too much

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  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Hey hunni, welcome to P&Q (I noticed from your profile that you are new.) Glad to see you here. There was a great rhyme scheme in your poem and you wrote with a lot of deep emotion. Something that would add to this poem would be a bit more description or detail. You have a lot of great lines, but their words are vague. Stronger description of your topic would make this great poem even greater. Still, a nice job. Thanks for posting it for us to read.

    -Eleesa

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