Sweet Surrender [Acrostic]

by aDORKable x3   Feb 23, 2007


Summer times spent lazily idling around
Welcoming the reprieve of the cool night's ground
Enjoy it while it lasts, 'cause Winter comes in time
Enjoy your life and let teh problems unwind
Take your time to admire all the beauty surrounding you
Savor the glory and don't think about what you're going through
Understand nothing and don't even have a care
Realize where you are and what is there
Remembering nothing, live for the moment now
Explaining the summer, some don't know how
Nice, some call it, but that's not the right word
Drab, some call it, I'd say that's absurd
Exquisite and unique, something new each day
Remember it well and don't let it slip away

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 3
    wonderful job... acrostics are hard to write because of the forced letters howwever not one line seems forced in the least bit... a beautiful write with wonderful word choice

  • 17 years ago

    by Thorn Lovely Dead And Lonely

    "Exquisite and unique, something new each day
    Remember it well and don't let it slip away"
    Very Eloquent :D

    Beautiful!

    -Emia Rose

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This poem was good. I think some parts were deeper than others and I enjoyed those. Like lines 7 and 8. I have to admit, the rhyme was a bit forced at time like word and absurd. Yes, they rhyme perfectly, but you could tell the next line just didn't fit it right. Just opinions though....cuz overall I really did like it! :)
    Good job!
    Charisma*

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