This poem was good. I think some parts were deeper than others and I enjoyed those. Like lines 7 and 8. I have to admit, the rhyme was a bit forced at time like word and absurd. Yes, they rhyme perfectly, but you could tell the next line just didn't fit it right. Just opinions though....cuz overall I really did like it! :)
Good job!
Charisma*

"Exquisite and unique, something new each day
Remember it well and don't let it slip away"
Very Eloquent :D

Beautiful!

-Emia Rose

COMMENT # 3
wonderful job... acrostics are hard to write because of the forced letters howwever not one line seems forced in the least bit... a beautiful write with wonderful word choice