by Rahl The Layman Lord Feb 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Love in a bottle |
by Daz Mellow
Love it! Great job. Bravo. Kudos. :) |
Omgds i love your style..such variety and authenticity...you bring such refreshing pieces to the bored...your a really good writer and i really enjoy reading and commenting your work..NEVER STOP WRITING. |
Awww Jas its adorable and very well writen i really liked it. i think u r right bout words having meaning. very good |
by silvershoes
Ok Jason, now I have read this poem a third time. I hate to admit it, but my eyes started to water this time. That might be because I just wrote a love poem and I'm now listening to the song, "Closing Time." Haha, or it might be because times have been so hard lately. Either way, your poem knocked my emotions over the edge, so it can't be as bad as originally said. Not that I ever said it was bad. Actually, I said it was good. Anyway, nice write. Excellent structure, best if read very slowly :) Imagery, as usual, was wonderful. 5/5 from me. |
by Laura
I love it!!!!!! It made me shed a tear or two! Its so amazing! |