Again a very sad poem with a lot of amazing imigery your very talented and I have voted honestly 5/5

I htink you could have made this into stanzas and made it more intense but this was a beautiful write a dark poem! nice job

An extremely poignant piece, it saddened me greatly. I enjoyed the beautiful subtle rhyming of this one, it wasn't over done.

Keep it up

Greta

The rhyme wasn't bad, and I think that you have promise, but this poem was really, really cliche. Try writing on something else, this topic has been done four thousand times already.

Reminds me of a few of my old 2005 murder/suicide poems. I'll give it a four. I think you could do better so it's not that I have anything against the poem it's just I wish there was more umph to it or some kind of hidden message or something like that.

There's a lot of raw emotion--which is good. I liked the reference to Three days Grace. It's...I will be honest, not the best sad poem I've read. It's good that you kept on topic but some of the subject and words were repetitive. Keep it up

Dark and suicidal yet again. You do write wonderful poems though, even if I don't always agree with the topic. But this is your poetry and my opinion on the topic doesn't effect my judgement. Great write. 5/5

marcella

Again, you did a great job. This was short, simple yet so so sad. You wrote this brilliantly and the last line was awesome.
love Tara-Kay
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Wow, what a powerful and chilling write! I really hope you've never felt like this. For some reason the words "crimson red" really stand out in the poem. Whether this is because they're also the title or of the image they create I'm not sure. Maybe it's a mixture of both! But it's certainly effective. Em xXx

Well, wow. I thought it was pretty good. The flow and rhyming were nice.

"Thanks for throwing me in hell" <-- I really liked that haha.

Um, I see a few I's that need to be capitalized, but that's about it. Great write!

Cayce xx

This poem is really nice... Simple but well-written. The flow was good, the word choices were great, and the poem overall was deep! 5/5

This was a brutally haunting poem I enjoyed it greatly you expressed yourself very well great job

Wow. This was really good. It was full of emotion, which is an important part of a poem. The rhyming was excellent. The only thing I can point out your lack of capitalization of proper nouns. "I", "Three Days Grace", that kind of stuff. And that is the only thing I can suggest you edit. This piece was awesome.

5/5

``Briana