Comments : Crying

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like the ending. I think that you could wrote this poem more better. It is interesting but atmosphere could be stronger. Still I like the topic and it is very unique piece, that deserves 5/5( also you have very original style of writing)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    Good job. I relate A LOT to your poems...all of them.