Comments : Drowning on dry land...

  • 17 years ago

    by Lillye

    Very Emotional Poem.
    Loves The Stanza
    "I'm tired of pointing fingers and playing guess the name,
    When its me all along...drowning in self pity and shame."
    was just brilliant, it flows well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mike

    That has got to be one of the best and smoothest poem iv read

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Whoa. firstly, i loved the title. so so funny, but about the poem it was amazing. the way you wrote it was perfect. bravo!

    5/5 david