Your nature poems are written the way I think they are intended to be: Serene when the mood in them calls for it to be. You write with few words: Yet the intensity is felt as a wave pounding against the rocks: Strong yet unbreakable. I admire these poems for they are soft in word choice but stand out as the scene they portray. *sigh*

Lovely lovely lovely :-)

You have a wonderful choice of words here and i've read this over and over but i just dont understand what its about"

I'm not sure but, I took this as the melting of snow maybe and the ending of winter. Spring begining, "a bud to wake" flower bud begining to bloom. Whatever the meaning you had on your mind when you wrote, it's a beuatiful poem. 5/5

marcella

This is really lovely, and apart from rating this a 5/5
i would really like to thank you for the comments, they are probably the most honest ones i have ever gotten, and it really makes me happy that someone wants to help me write, thx!
luv gabriella

It was short and sweet.

Excellent imagery! In fact, one of the most eloquent uses of imagery I've seen in awhile. Alas, I seem to always try to relate imagery into a concept, use it to sharpen the point I am trying to convey. I have never tried to just describe a event of nature. Unless I am missing something I assume that is what you are doing. Good job!

I loved the beaty that nature poems seem to hold in them. You did a great job on this one, the imagery was wonderful.This is a beatiful poem with a great flow. It was quite short yet it came togerther quite easily. I was engaged from the first line as i wanted to know what you were talkling about. I wish it was longer htough, yet i know you ended it with the bud opening. But i dont know something engaged me and i wanna read more of it... Lol maybe im just weird. Anyways an excellent poem again! xx