Your an amazing poet! thanks for my comment also. i loved this poem, it hits close to home i been there but my fave stansa says it all
"and now in the armchair of death
i take my mask off and be me
not that person at school
i mean me the true me
the person i was too afraid to be... "
i hate that feeling of a mask but i lso am afriad to show ppl the real me keep it up well written and check out some more of my stuff thanks!!!

nessa

Hey I saw your post on the forum and so i thought i'd chack out your poems and stuff!! Welcome to the forum and stuff, you should sak poeple to read your featured poems. They're hood lol!!!

x

Thanks for the comment on my poem.
You're a special person too.
And you're right, you can learn A LOT through people's poems...
But Oh wow.
This is a GREAT poem.
I can REALLY relate.
I really like when you say "and now in the arm chair of death
I take my mask off and be me
Not that person at school
I mean me the true me
The person I was too afraid to be..."
I wear a mask everyday..
and i'll always be here if you need to talk too... kelseyjh@hotmail.com

This is a really good poem. I know a lot of people can relate to this poem. I know I can, I waer a mask every day 5/5

Kalee

Great poem...i love it! i also love your profile!!!! anytime you need to talk just email me. (the person email on my profile)

xoxo becca

Wow. This is really sad but it's also totes good. ^_^ and thx for the comment! You're brilliant.

Whew.. u pulled my emotions dude just by reading the wordings in ur poems.. keep it up dude.. and thank u for reading my poems..

Wow very well written i loved it really sorry 4 you if you had to feel this way.anyhow excellent work well done 5-5

Strange, that's the same way I tried to commit suicide...but anyway, great poem.

It was great

and now in the armchair of death
i take my mask off and be me
not that person at school
i mean me the true me
the person i was too afraid to be...

loved these lines they were me
thx for the great poems

Dude this is amazin i even got goosebumps readin it it hits close to home n i understand the feeling put into this its amazin great work

Wow thats wonderful I see the images in my mind

Dude james seriously you nearly made me cry happy now? lol anyway i wish i could write this good and i hope you are feeling better lately and not just saying youre fine... xxxx