My Perfect Day

by Michelle   Apr 6, 2004


As I slowly awoke today
I found you there next to me in bed
I turned into your body
On your shoulder, rested my head.
Sleepy blue eyes opened
And looked into mine
I saw my love for you reflected there
Love created by our own design.
There's nothing more perfect
Than waking next to you on a lazy Saturday
We would never leave our bed
If I could have MY say...!
But breakfast time is here
So we slowly make our way
And just like many weekends
End up down at Barb's Cafe.
Corey's being a pest again
But we don't even care
All that is important is your next to me
You're finally not imagined, really there!
After some bangers, bacon and toast
We're deciding what to do with our day
"Let's go down to the lake awhile"
Is finally what we say...
A day spent at the beach
Laughter, sun and sand
And then we're headed home again
Riding hand in hand.
A little dinner, a little television
Time to settle in for the night
For once Corey goes to bed
Without putting up a fight.
Now some alone time with my baby
My favorite part of the day
"Why don't we go to bed ourselves?"
"I wouldn't have it any other way"
Before we go to sleep again
We make love in the candlelight
It flickers off our glistening bodies
In the blackness of the night.
Then I snuggle close to you
And you pull me in tight
I've never had a more beautiful day
Or one that's ever felt so right.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Roula

    Hey Michelle, this was an awsome, great, fabulous poem :) Good luck for you and Craig and I hope you'll be together soon, to have the PERFECT day you're dreaming of :) I loved your poem, and definiately this PERFECT day that everybody dreams about :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    OMG great poem. And craig, long comment but totally sweet. OOoohhh a match made in heaven. I'll leave u two alone now but the best of luck. For the rest of ur lives. Keep it up, Michelle. Luv always, Rose

  • 20 years ago

    by craig

    oh michelle, you have no idea wot images and feelings these lines are evoking inside me, cannot think of a better way to spend a lazy saturday (other than jus staying in bed ALL day!) than aimlessly doing nothing with with you, my sweet special friend. jus as long as were doing anything together would be perfect enough. almost hurts to read this piece because i want these things so badly its killing me having to wait.
    waking in the florence dawn with you nestling into me, your sweet beautiful face the first thing my sleepy blue eyes see. and you would definiatly see my love reflected inside them, all glazed over with contentment and blissful satisfaction. i would get up and go and put some coffee/tea on and climb back in there next to you. ps2 would keep corey occupied for half and hour while i was occupying myself with you, showing you just how much i really do love you. slow love making, tender kisses and slow rythmic pelvic strokes, biting into yr neck, licking yr lips with my tongue, sucking on yr nipples as you arch you back in the climax...er i think you get the picture. wow!, wot a poem!!!
    after our bath we wonder down to the breakfast bar for `bangers, bacon and toast` idly deciding how we are going to spend our precious time together, our perfect day. going to the lake, walking through the woods, watching corey playing `football!` anything with you baby will be heaven. anytime with you would be a privlidge and a pleasure.
    `riding hand in hand` ,`heading home`. home, i love the sound of that michelle, back to our place, our love nest! an evening cuddled up on the couch, not even talking, jus intoxicated and comfortable in each others presence, flicking through the channels waiting to go to bed. me wispering `i love you` into your ear every five mins and staring with unblinking eyes at your beauty.
    `make love in the candlelight, flickers off our glistening bodies` great lines baby, wonderful lines baby! conjouring up a sweet romantic picture in my panting mind. and then the snuggles, both breathless, laying exhausted from the passion, slowly falling asleep in each others arms. i cant think of any better way to spend my time than how you have described in this poem. i cant think of anyone else who i`d rather be spending my time with other than perfect you. your best piece by far. even gone to the trouble of writing it down so i have it in my pocket with me, carrying it everywhere i go. yr beautiful, talented and mine. i must have been a saint or saved a million lives in a previous life to have been blessed with your love. thankyou angel xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great poem, Michelle! Very, very nice, indeed!

  • 20 years ago

    by Kidpoetry

    WOOOOOOOOW!!!! Thats sounds like the perfect day for anyone Michelle. Especially me! Vety good. Damn i wish i could come up wit these kind of ideas. But i cant as well as you can...so at lest i can read abt it rom you. Great Poem!!!!

    -Seanny