WOOOOOOOOW!!!! Thats sounds like the perfect day for anyone Michelle. Especially me! Vety good. Damn i wish i could come up wit these kind of ideas. But i cant as well as you can...so at lest i can read abt it rom you. Great Poem!!!!

-Seanny

Great poem, Michelle! Very, very nice, indeed!

oh michelle, you have no idea wot images and feelings these lines are evoking inside me, cannot think of a better way to spend a lazy saturday (other than jus staying in bed ALL day!) than aimlessly doing nothing with with you, my sweet special friend. jus as long as were doing anything together would be perfect enough. almost hurts to read this piece because i want these things so badly its killing me having to wait.
waking in the florence dawn with you nestling into me, your sweet beautiful face the first thing my sleepy blue eyes see. and you would definiatly see my love reflected inside them, all glazed over with contentment and blissful satisfaction. i would get up and go and put some coffee/tea on and climb back in there next to you. ps2 would keep corey occupied for half and hour while i was occupying myself with you, showing you just how much i really do love you. slow love making, tender kisses and slow rythmic pelvic strokes, biting into yr neck, licking yr lips with my tongue, sucking on yr nipples as you arch you back in the climax...er i think you get the picture. wow!, wot a poem!!!
after our bath we wonder down to the breakfast bar for `bangers, bacon and toast` idly deciding how we are going to spend our precious time together, our perfect day. going to the lake, walking through the woods, watching corey playing `football!` anything with you baby will be heaven. anytime with you would be a privlidge and a pleasure.
`riding hand in hand` ,`heading home`. home, i love the sound of that michelle, back to our place, our love nest! an evening cuddled up on the couch, not even talking, jus intoxicated and comfortable in each others presence, flicking through the channels waiting to go to bed. me wispering `i love you` into your ear every five mins and staring with unblinking eyes at your beauty.
`make love in the candlelight, flickers off our glistening bodies` great lines baby, wonderful lines baby! conjouring up a sweet romantic picture in my panting mind. and then the snuggles, both breathless, laying exhausted from the passion, slowly falling asleep in each others arms. i cant think of any better way to spend my time than how you have described in this poem. i cant think of anyone else who i`d rather be spending my time with other than perfect you. your best piece by far. even gone to the trouble of writing it down so i have it in my pocket with me, carrying it everywhere i go. yr beautiful, talented and mine. i must have been a saint or saved a million lives in a previous life to have been blessed with your love. thankyou angel xxx

OMG great poem. And craig, long comment but totally sweet. OOoohhh a match made in heaven. I'll leave u two alone now but the best of luck. For the rest of ur lives. Keep it up, Michelle. Luv always, Rose

Hey Michelle, this was an awsome, great, fabulous poem :) Good luck for you and Craig and I hope you'll be together soon, to have the PERFECT day you're dreaming of :) I loved your poem, and definiately this PERFECT day that everybody dreams about :)