Awwwww this poem is sad too! but cheer up buttercup.lol..im here 4 ya!

luv ya!

~michelle~

That last line really hit me hard...I thought it had great impact.
This was beautifully written, the pain behind the words clearly show and though it is so sad, it is still a wonderful read.
Great work.

Gaah.. i know how you feel with this one 5/5 thanks for commenting me <3

So sad and so well written...
i'm amazed...

*isabel*

It's a sad piece.
I understand what
you're trying to speak though.

I doubt you can comprehend how many people will read this poem, and relate to it so greatly, and realize that they aren't alone, even if it is just a girl on a website, you can change lives with work like this. Nice nice job.

Great poem! I can relate to this poem so much because I actually used to feel this way. I wrote a poem about it too! Called "Fake Smiles and Pretend Laughs"
So other people have felt that way too.
I loved how it was written and I absolutely loved the last 2 lines!!

"So for now she'll do her best to walk around in happy style,
And she'll keep on hiding behind that fake smile."

it's sooo true. You are amazingly talented. Keep on writing poetry!!!

--Justina

This poem was wrote when I was born..
It is amazing. On the exactly date.