by Curry Feb 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I miss the way it used to be, |
by Julienne
I experience the exact same thing, and i still have hurt and pain inside me even now! I read this poem and I am totally in love with it, i want to thank you for posting it as i greatly admire our work, in the words you placed upon the page my emotions came tearing out of me as each word you used described exactly the pain i had been though... thank you so much you have truly done an excellent job!!! |
by tyanna
Good job hun..I liked this one.. It's filled with lots of emotion and it's deep.. Nice choice of words also..Great write! 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
I love this line. |
I love this one, because i also have a guy that hates me now, and i have no clue why... maybe its because of all the sh*t i say to him... maybe its because he knows that he wants me just as much as i want him, but i guess ill never know. the only time he talks to me is when he wants/needs something |
by Liz
Awe, hun. This was sad. I liked it though, cos I went through the same thing in the past. I like how you expressed your feelings here. keep writing!! 5/5 |