Wow.. that was aweose.. not much ryming but it gave me a good picture of what u were gettign at..!! i got butterflies while reading it becuz it reminds me of me and my x!! :-( 5/5!! dont be a stranger!!
teri rose

Awwwwwww that was soooo sad ! i know the story behind this poem!

luv ya !

~michelle~

Again this is really good. I can really relate to this poem and you have explained it exactly. 5/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

Awe, hun. This was sad. I liked it though, cos I went through the same thing in the past. I like how you expressed your feelings here. keep writing!! 5/5

-` Liz

I love this one, because i also have a guy that hates me now, and i have no clue why... maybe its because of all the sh*t i say to him... maybe its because he knows that he wants me just as much as i want him, but i guess ill never know. the only time he talks to me is when he wants/needs something

I love this line.

Its like all the good memories of us were nothing but a dream.

Anyway the one, your describing in this poem is it different from your poem "He's my everything" if its the same guy.. I feel sorry.. anyway great poem! keep up the good work!

-Excuse my bad english

TC :)

Good job hun..I liked this one.. It's filled with lots of emotion and it's deep.. Nice choice of words also..Great write! 5/5
Tyanna

I experience the exact same thing, and i still have hurt and pain inside me even now! I read this poem and I am totally in love with it, i want to thank you for posting it as i greatly admire our work, in the words you placed upon the page my emotions came tearing out of me as each word you used described exactly the pain i had been though... thank you so much you have truly done an excellent job!!!