Missing the love

by Kaila   Feb 24, 2007


I love you so much I cry
and most of the time
I don't even no why

I'll flip on a song
That reminds me of you
I just sometimes don't know what to do

We had a love
So great and pure
Now to you it's all a blur

I miss the times you cared
And the quite evenings
We shared

I miss the warmth of your hug
I still have that bear that said
Keep me snug

I wish you were here to hold me tight
and tell me every thing's
gonna be alright

I wish you loved me still
because the love we had
was such a thrill

I wouldn't change anything we shared
Because I always thought
Someday you'd care

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Its romanting and lovely poem i loved you this poem
    I wish you loved me still
    because the love we had
    was such a thrill

    i loved your this stanza take care 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I agree all the way with this one. you keep sending out messages and strong emotions from your poems. i love them. please keep writing. i hope to read more from you soon

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I found this to be very bittersweet.
    I liked the flow, and I thought the rhyme scheme was okay.
    The emotion behind the words is clear to see.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katlynn

    I like this poem its very sad and it makes me think of everything i use to miss you know. very nice though you are talented.

    keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw. It's definitley sweet and rather sad. The poem itself is kinda cliche and I think you could use better word choices to really make it stand out and not blend with the many "lost love" poems. I will give you a 5/5 cause overall it's a nice poem.

    marcella

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