Too Bad...

by Rebecca   Apr 6, 2004


I can write a beautiful poem
That will paint vivid
Thoughts in your mind
Your face will be livid
With tremendous shock

I can write a wonderful poem
You’ll be crying
By the end of it
It’ll be like flying
Along with the words

I can write a poem so great
You’ll be sitting
At edge of your seat
Without a face of wilting
With remarkable suspense

I can write a poem so gorgeous
You’ll be waiting
On very single word
Like on crisp lake skating
In the snowy mountains

I can write a poem so beautiful
Like a flowing dance
With every movement
Having you in a trance
With your eyes wide opened

I can write a poem so wonderful
Like a stunning song
With each and every note
Have you singing along
Each measure better then last

I can write a great poem
Like artwork that you
Can’t take your eyes off
Can’t find it true
That somebody drew this

The only problem is
I don’t know what to write
And I’m sure that you
Can't be in much delight

Oh well…

Too Bad…

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  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    cool use of metaphors. take care :)