Comments : My Sister, [I'm sorry]

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    The 5th part was my favorite somehow i can't believe a word you say
    etc etc wow this poem reel me in with every word just wanting more.
    good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Wow... good job... it was deep!