by Curry Feb 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A teenage girl, |
by tyanna
Another touching poem!! So sad.. |
by Marc Ortiz
Sad.. but beautiful :) I feel sorry for the girl in the poem.. |
by Kristina
Aww this is really sad, but very deep. you did a great job writing it. it flowed really nicely. 5/5 |
by Tricky Daze
You wrpte a reality from our world..there are millions of girls in the street like her...so we're really the luck ones..you described that feelings so good |
by AlaSkA
Well written and good usage of emotions. hard hitting and straight forward. alot of people can some how relate to longing for a "home". not always in the convienal sense but in a mental sort of way. like a home is where you make it/where the heart is. good work. (: |