Awe, this was so sad and very beautifully written. I loved it.

Whoa the ending, a bit sad. sob sob. lol. i don't want any1 to die. everyone should be happy. but this poem really appealed to me, i hope it does to others as well.

5/5 David

This is such a good poem. I know alot of people can relate to it, i liked the ending it gave it a twist other poems that i have didn't have. 5/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

4/5 it was a good poem. It focuses on a lot of the after math and not really why or how deep they were..

very.. sadening image you created. i know the feeling and thank God i never got that bad. haha.

take care. good job.

-linds[[x]]

I like how this poem tells a story. it has good detail and i can picture in my head whats going on. alot of emotion too! good job

I rely like this one. because sometiems thats exactly how i feel. except there never is a gun around so i cant exactly blow my brains out

Very descriptive, love the emotions you convey. 5/5, great job.

Great job.
5/5

~Chelsea

Awe! *tear* thats so sad...but its really good! i love it! 5/5

xo kisses xo

Imaginery is so alive...you live and feel them
And it made me cry really
A good masterpiece
Good job
Laura

It's so sad and wonderfully written...

*isabel*

Aww this is such a sad poem! I don't like poems about suicide. But good write.

I like the imagery in the poem! :) anyway we have the same ending in one of my poem hihi! :) good job! 5/5!

I like how you seemed to get inside the mind of the girl... i hope you are ok, if this is from personal experience, but yeas it was a very well written piece and the words just seemed to flow, so congratulations on such a fine piece of writing... 5/5 keep the good work going!

Dang that waz truely touchin great job 5/5

Hmm, it's a pretty cliche poem. I liked the rhyming and flow though.

Good job.

Cayce xx