Good job
Your love shines in this piece.
Keep writing
Cindy

Awww adorable write nice job I can realte big time!

Great poem, loved it. 5 from me, if you have time can you comment on some of mine, bye for now

That ending was so cute!
And the whole poem was so prettyful!
Beautiful writing.

What if he left you?

your servant:
david

This was very sweet, except I think more experience vocabulary could have been used. In my opinion, it was rather simple. Also, some advice, don't miss out your apostrophes when typing 'He's', 'Hes' is wrong.

It was nice to read. :)

Very Sweet. Reminds me of my guy. :)

Awww... i got all teary eyed when i read this! it was amazing. i liked the flow & how it felt like you were writing from my heart

Aw, this is really sweet.
Loved it.
5/5

~Chelsea

So sweet and cute..effective imaginery and good wording
Flow makes you going and fluidy
So i don't think there is something wrong catches the eye
Keep up the good work
Laura

Heyy amizing poem and how do u win awords j/w?

Wow! Great poem! I really liked it, you are lucky to have him!

GREAT poem! You're both lucky to have each other! 5/5! Good WORK! :)

It was a nice poem to read, if you broke it into stanza's it would seem more appealing to someone to read as chunks of text usually throw people off, but it was really well written in terms of wording and flow, and i dont know why people seem to have such a hang up on grammar, its a poem and as long as the message is across, apostrophies aren't so big a deal to me, but thanks for it, i really liked it

Good Poem.. I'm glad that someone has found the love of there life.. It seems like i wont ever.. anywho. It flows great.. keep writing..

Great job 5/5

Good work.
The words you use
clearly express the
love. I like it. =)