Too Far

by Brittney Follett   Feb 24, 2007


I love you so much,
And I know you love me.
But with all this pressure,
I'm not sure we can be.

You see, I hate being forced.
And you're forcing me too far.
I hate the way you push,
You're pushing me way too far.

I hate the way you want.
The way you want me.
I do love you, but...
Oh why can't you just see?!

I want to have it someday,
But not until I am wed.
You want me to have sex,
It's driving me out of my head.

You want it, me, right now.
I just want us to wait,
But if you keep this up.
You're gonna lose me at this rate.

My past is killing me.
In my mind lies a scar.
I was molested at nine...
And you're pushing me too far.

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Did I end it right? Should I write more?
I'm not sure, Tell me what you think,
What can I do to make it better.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow I love this poem!! You did a wonderful job! I find myself thinking the same things sometime you did an excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dee

    I like the idea of the poem. i dont knowif its true or not but its a good story to write about. in the 2nd stanza u rhymed far with far which doesnt flow with the poem at all. the emotion didnt seem to be in the first part of the poem but it came out more towards the end. i think you should continue the poem and add alot more detail. but besides that, nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I loved the emotion! there was a good flow going there too

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I thought the ending was great. This poem deals with a bunch of other people who go through this. Very wel done! It flowed very smoothly. It didn't seemed forced rhymed. Keep up the great work. God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    This kind of guys drive every girl crazy
    They are just selfish
    But you really made the points good
    Keep it up
    LAURA

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