Niceee. i like how u potray tt feeling tt fills ur heart as poison... love it...

maya

WOW! I loved it! I loved the flow and the poem went on so very nicely! Amazing! Keep up the awesome work! And thank you so much for commenting!

This poem is so good but you would get more postive if it was on the
explicit/ drugs and alcohol section
i like the way you make the reader
figure out what you're talking about
good job
cy

Nice flow.... very well written! 5/5