On a emotional rollacoaster

by rachel osorio   Feb 25, 2007


If life was you i would ride it all night

but a person can only stay on a ride for so long

the ride started out beautiful

it started to give you feelings

beautiful feelings that you never felt before

and you easily call it love........

just because your new at it

or just because you always prayed for it

then the ride starts to........ slow....... down...........

and you realize how everything really was

the truth of how you really felt....

and suddenly.........

you get sick and wanna throw up

but when you think the ride is over

it never ends.....

it just keeps going......

and going...

and going......

until you wanna cry.......

so like i said before..........

if life was you I'll ride it all night......

but you can only stay on a ride for so long.........

your the reason why i felt these feelings...

and your the reason why i thought it was love....

because i was new at it

and because i always prayed for it

your the reason why i feel this way...... now......

and it's because you slowed......... life........ down..........

and it got me sick...

sick of you..............

but when i thought you would stop

messing with my head.........

the ride kept on going

and going....

and going.......

until i wanted to cry....

your the reason why wanna cry.....

because really truly this is how i feel....

and I'm not sure if I'm right.....

I'm might just be plain straight crazy

maybe even crazy over you............

but you got me confused....

and i didn't know what to do

because love is holding me tight against ma seat

and i can't get off this ride

i can't get off.......

i wanna get off......

i wanna get..... off........... now.........................

at least..... i think....... i wanna get off...............now.........

but i can't...

because I'm confused......

and i think I'm really truly in love with you

i don't know but if

this is how you really suppose to feel

when your in love......

then I'll do it over and over again

just because it's with you

but then belt buckle finally got loose from my waist

and i realized ....

that i was free

to get off the ride

but if only i wasn't so dam confused

and so damn in love.....

then i would of got off...

but then I'm not through

through of being in love with you

not yet......

I'll just continue giving you my heart?

and in the end I'll see........

if my money was worth the extra ride

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    by Tiffany Baker

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