by Cooper Feb 25, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Pour salt on funeral fires, |
Amazing poem!!! Gr8!! 5/5 definitely!!! |
Love the twist in this and i love the complexity of your emotions and your descreiptive tone..amazing stuff keep it up |
O...M...G..... that was amazing. The imagry you use is stunning, and I always love your choice of words!! The flow is great!! Awesome job my friend!! 5/5 (even though it deserves more!)!! |
by Lithium
Wow you've painted such a picture with your words and created a great image to go with your poem, well done. |