by Lauren Feb 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I wake to the sound of bangs and screams, |
by Sourav
Good flow... interesting theme... nice one! |
by kasia nicole
Wowo this is a very good poem words could not explain your a very good writter. 5/5 kasia |
by Roxy
As I read that it's as though the words wouldn't let me stop and I had to continue reading until I had reached the end completely. Like Paula67! said above it's very dramatic...Keep it up!! |