Comments : The Fire

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    As I read that it's as though the words wouldn't let me stop and I had to continue reading until I had reached the end completely. Like Paula67! said above it's very dramatic...Keep it up!!
    xx Roxy

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Wowo this is a very good poem words could not explain your a very good writter. 5/5 kasia

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good flow... interesting theme... nice one!