A Frozen Summer (metaphorical)

I liked this poem. It's sad, and can be enterprited [sp] in many ways. Not just by seasons staying the same.

I didn't like the first stanza too well, it didn't seem to flow as good as the rest of the poem. The rest of the poem, however.. Had a perfect flow, and rhyming.

Overall, I think you did a great job with this poem.
Keep it up.
<3 Teria.

I love the way you used a subject such as requited lost love and turned into a poem that some may think it is about nature...

You even warned them that it was metophorical yet some think it is about nature...Lol.

Summer sleeps, when winter wakes
In warmth it's numb from cold"

Now I love those two lines because it actually captured me to read more...I sat here reading it aloud again and again. Trying to decipher what you meant by this. But I will give my own intrepretation. Summer sleeps would mean that your jovial nature to love has been traumatised and now it needs rest to heal, and in it's place, is the forboding nature of apathy and sadness coupled with loneliness when I think of the two words "winter wakes".

It's warmth numb with cold"

As I already said, that the apathy sadness and loneliness that winter brings start to permeate through your heart that it actually freezes your heart in a way...

All in All...It was a really thought provoking beautifully inspired poem...Thanks for the giving me something to think about...

Wow the words just seemed to fit almost like a puzzle you did a wonderful job i loved it!

I'm adding you to my favourites because you write with your heart. And your descriptions leap off the page into my head. I want more of this

5.5

LOVE IT!
- Emma

p.s thank you for the comment and keep in touch

Ooh, i liked this one!! it was amazing. the flow was perfect.
much love and many kisses,
bex