I love the way you write.
after reading your last poem I was looking forward to it.
You portray the seasons so beautifully
please, keep writing
I look forward to seeing more of your work!

This was really good, I loved the imagery. Nice job.

Uhm great job, i dont think i got the metaphore and it so obviously looks like people dont read titles cause its not actually about nature. i THINK that the metaphore has something to do with love. and summer is like broken hearts and like winter is the strengthening of the heart thats broken.

great job even though im prob wrong. it was written really well

Wow your an excellent poet i loved the wording to this poem!

Wow this was amazing... At first I was a little reserved because I'm not a big fan of nature poems usually but this one was magnificent. I think thats because the whole thing was metaphores, not quiet sure what they meant but that doesnt matter.. Wonderful write your a very good poet. Keep writing and never stop no matter what anyone tells you because you have a gift, and that gift should be shared with the world. Thanx so much for the comment on my poem it meant a lot to me.

Ahh very good. It's a shame you had to even put metaphorical in the title, shows what kind of intelligence to expect on this site doesn't it?
Anyway, the whole idea was quite, different, quite worrying and certainly one to stir the thoughts.
I think on the second line of the second stanza, you may have meant "seen."
The general flow was good although it slipped on the second to last line "won't just" seemed clumsy. Maybe punctuation could aid flow too?
Thanks for sharing.

Wow another great job of yours. I love the way you wrote it 5/5 keep it up.

Good poem. i think there were a couple of sp. mistakes. 'seen' & 'tiring'. it was a unique concept. nice visual qualities. it has passion. good work! -beav :)

I llike the flow of your work this poem realy made me feel like i was the frozen summer love the meataphoric side of things can relate loving the great work of this and your other poems keep it up
james&jamez

Such a beautiful poem, great work.

That was a really nice poem, and it flowed with happiness. Well done

Wow, i really like this poem. This was amazing and really nothing to say about this, excellent.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever, also thank you for commenting my poems sorry it took me a bit to get back to you.

Nice job! Loved your word choices.

Now that the summer , is ending fast,
The burning heat is becoming a breeze
But soon the waves won't just turn cold
One day they will completely freeze

I really liked this stanza
Take Care Cindy

Ooh, i liked this one!! it was amazing. the flow was perfect.
much love and many kisses,
bex

I'm adding you to my favourites because you write with your heart. And your descriptions leap off the page into my head. I want more of this

5.5

LOVE IT!
- Emma

p.s thank you for the comment and keep in touch

Wow the words just seemed to fit almost like a puzzle you did a wonderful job i loved it!

I love the way you used a subject such as requited lost love and turned into a poem that some may think it is about nature...

You even warned them that it was metophorical yet some think it is about nature...Lol.

Summer sleeps, when winter wakes
In warmth it's numb from cold"

Now I love those two lines because it actually captured me to read more...I sat here reading it aloud again and again. Trying to decipher what you meant by this. But I will give my own intrepretation. Summer sleeps would mean that your jovial nature to love has been traumatised and now it needs rest to heal, and in it's place, is the forboding nature of apathy and sadness coupled with loneliness when I think of the two words "winter wakes".

It's warmth numb with cold"

As I already said, that the apathy sadness and loneliness that winter brings start to permeate through your heart that it actually freezes your heart in a way...

All in All...It was a really thought provoking beautifully inspired poem...Thanks for the giving me something to think about...

I liked this poem. It's sad, and can be enterprited [sp] in many ways. Not just by seasons staying the same.

I didn't like the first stanza too well, it didn't seem to flow as good as the rest of the poem. The rest of the poem, however.. Had a perfect flow, and rhyming.

Overall, I think you did a great job with this poem.
Keep it up.
<3 Teria.