Great write! extremely applicable to this site. let me just say, i noticed you! :) nice personification of the poem. truth rings throughout! 5 for you! -beav

Awww I really liked this poem. I think you did a great job with this. You could have capitolized the first letters in each line or at the begining of a sentence but didn't mess up the flow. very well done. God bless 5/5

In my opinion poetry is usually a form of self expression, thoughts and feelings on a particular subject. Your subject in this case is the poem itself and the feedback it may or may not receieve. And that once the poem is read and the usual one-liner comments are left the poem is forgotten about. I suppose if it has truly touched someone in someway it will be in the mind. I can think of several peoples poems that will never leave my mind and have made lasting impressions because of the message received from the emotion written in their poem. Sure most of like/love feedback and want to improve our poetry in some form. So to answer the question within your write in my opinion the really great writes will not be forgotten. Wether we remember exact lines or words it has made and impact in some small minuscule way.
And by the way I think you did very nice in writing this piece, wether shuffled amongst the rest for a moment it made me think and that is a great poem in my opinion.
Dixie

This pretty well explains the exact state of the world of today. 'tis a pity :(

glad you've posted a new poem!

Marjan

I really really like this its so so so good
its going on my favorites 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!
it says so much in so little mwords