Very well written. The flow and rhythmn of the poem was excellent as was the message.

Bravo
Jeannie

Great work, this poem was very well written
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5/5
Nice job

A very powerful piece. Well written/worded, nice flow and rhyme scheme. There is a sobering message here for us all.
Peace, Love, Poetry & Power,
Gary Jurechka

Wow..... very well written! great work :) 5/5

A very interesting read.. quite deep and powerful.. emotion that you feel are very well expressed.

"We've lost the path that leads to
the end where mankind wins."

Sadly.. very true indeed we have my friend.

Shouldn't this:

^The prize^
read "the price"?

The flow and imagery in this piece are great. Once again a very thought provoking and powerful write. Great job!