Comments : What Lies Beneath Your Skin

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very sensual to make you feel giddy. The "touch this, touch that" in the first stanza - very sexy.
    Your wording was clever. I enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    What a wonderful piece you have written.

    But now I wait for
    My glowing - my melting
    Oh - please - let it begin
    I unlock my door
    So you can slip inside to find
    What lies beneath my skin

    Loved this.
    Take Care Cindy