by Boy Feb 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Today I am missing you a lot |
by Goodbye
This poem is sweet and beautiful. I like the ending of it...your wishes to her become your wife... It is beautiful...Good job.. |
by Kaila
This was great nice job |
by Lithium
That was a lovely poem, you certainly tell us this women is very special, great writing, your message came across strong. xox sam |
Its good but you need to organize your thoughts a little more... you seem like you just think of the lines and throw them in there as they pop in your head try takeing some time and when you think of some thing write it down a piece of paper and later put them together so they make sense....but it's good and i like it |
What a great dedication..could feel ur true love...its really very beautifully written...keep writing |