by Twisted Heart Feb 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
You've taken me hostage by the sound of your voice |
by PAUL HEWSON
Stanza 3 wow 5/5 |
by East Poetry
A beautiful poem with and ending to die for. An ending that puts the icing on the cake. So far this poem has the best ending of all I've read so far. I started at the top.5/5 |
by Genna
I read your latest poem and just had to see what else you have written. This is absolutely devine! You truely are a great writer. Definately adding you to my fav list. |
The flow was not your best and the message could be stronger, but still a wonderful. You are a great read and I am enjoying your work. |
by Mo
Hi again - I really liked this poem too. I wouldn't say that it was "sweet" or a "love poem"... I would say that its about lust and erotica that is forbidden. A burning desire that cant be quenched and that cant be refused but that is regretted in time? Is that right? Well - that is what I got out of it. Great wording. The rhythm made it feel like a quickening heart beat. |